Task 1 #3 - Secondary School Attendance

Below is an IELTS Writing Task 1 Table and a model answer.
With a table, you need to do much the same as you would for any other question that requires you to write about data.
In this case, the table is over time, so you would treat it like a line graph and describe the changes.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The table shows the Proportions of Pupils Attending Four Secondary School Types Between Between 2000 and 2009
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words. 

Secondary School Attendance


2000
 2005
 2009
Specialist Schools
12%
11%
10%
Grammar Schools
24%
19%
12%
Voluntary-controlled  Schools
52%
38%
20%
Community Schools
12%
32%
58%

Model Answer
The table illustrates the percentage of school children attending four different types of secondary school from 2000 to 2009. It is evident that the specialist, grammar and voluntary-controlled schools experienced declines in numbers of pupils, whereas the community schools became the most important providers of secondary school education during the same period.
To begin, the proportion in voluntary-controlled schools fell from just over half to only 20% or one fifth from 2000 to 2009. Similarly, the relative number of children in grammar schools -- just under one quarter -- dropped by half in the same period. As for the specialist schools, the relatively small percentage of pupils attending this type of school (12%) also fell, although not significantly.
However, while the other three types of school declined in importance, the opposite was true in the case of community schools. In fact, while only a small minority of 12% were educated in these schools in 2000, this figure increased to well over half of all pupils during the following nine years.
Words 170


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